WALT solve addition equations using a place value strategy.
I am a Year 4 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Whaea Deb is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Wednesday, June 30, 2021
Thursday, June 10, 2021
First Draft - Mahuika Show.
Once upon a time Kahu was chasing Sissy because Sissy was being silly and then Kahu and Sissy had found a magic Kete and the magic Kete turned there Nan into a piece of coal and Kahu and Sissy said to the magic Kete can you turn my Nan back but the magic Kete could not turn there Nan back only Mahuika could but can you tell us where Mahuika is. yes I can tell you where Mahuika is so they went are we there yet no we still have to get the past Pukeko where all most at the pond you did int tell us your name my name is Potiki the last burning finger nail are you really the last burning finger nail yes said potiki.
Next steps
- Re read each sentence - does it make sense?
- Re-craft - how can you improve your writing?
- What details could you add to elaborate on the story.
- Full stops and capital letters
- Correct your spelling errors.