We wrote a recount about our evacuation experience. WALT add details to our writing and edit carefully.
First Draft
Last Friday we were typing out free writing Friday and then we heard an evacuation saying there might be a tsunami coming to crush us so we went up the hill. It was hard to walk up the hill and then we stopped for morning tea and then we went to the top of the hill and stopped for lunch and then the teacher said there is no tsunami so we went back when we got back I saw Dad so I got in the car and then we Drove back home!!!
Hi Jesse, it must have been a hard walk up the hill, it looks very high. Lucky you have a big hill to climb for your Emergency Tsunami Evacuation.
ReplyDeleteGood thing Dad came to collect you and take you home.